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Glare at me while I wait with closed eyes,
Feeling your thin fingers draw my neck.
And while your placid lips linger on mine
I begin my siren song - deep in the throat -
             Gentle--gentle
I amuse your neck with my glittering blade.
             Gentle--gentle

This dagger, cold as your heart, follows
My grazing fingers down your spine.
To where shall I introduce this new pain,
Which will hurt as I have by your hands?
             Slow-so-slowly
I will show you how to love pain as I have.
             Slow-so-slowly

Your icy fingers entwine my hair,
Your lips rest on the pulse of my neck,
And your burning breath siezes my ear.
"Kill me and you will lose yourself,"
             Quietly
"I have yet fallen for the wiles of you, seductress."
             Quietly

Now your jaundiced eyes search mine
For some sign of repentance of this vendetta.
You feel the passion overflowing,
Your hand tightens on my side, feel my grief!
             Overflow
Your blood relies on nothing to hold it
             Overflow

Deed done, -overflowed- I lay you to rest -
Stealing back my blade -- my heart
Stealing back your blood -- your life
With which I paint my haunted eyes
             Deadly-so-deadly
The love of fearing hearts impassioned
             Deadly-so-deadly
©2005-2009 ~ice--eyes
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Author's Comments

This was written in November 05. Things have changed since then, this is just a story, not to mention fictional; just based on my emotions.

My Blade--My Heart (Part I)
Remorse (Part II)
Disgraced (Part III)

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:icontuf-luv:
wow very odd but in a good way not usually something i would like but this i do *hits sef in head for making no sense* anyways me likes so you get a :+fav: and a :hug:

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I don't get why people lable other people or themselves I personaly think that you should just be you and not care what other people think.
:iconice--eyes:
thank you very much!!! :hug:

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"Anyone who doesn't appreciate poetry, doesn't understand that it's all about seduction."

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:icontuf-luv:
np *now what was i looking for again..... omfg it's a kitty*

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I don't get why people lable other people or themselves I personaly think that you should just be you and not care what other people think.
:iconice--eyes:
:confused: :)

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"Anyone who doesn't appreciate poetry, doesn't understand that it's all about seduction."

:kiss:
:iconmaici:
Wow, I got goosebumps when I read this.. you are very very very great at writing and damn you have alot of creativeness! My fav line is "Your blood relies on nothing to hold it." :D

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The probability of someone watching you is proportional to the stupidity of your action.

Maici
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:iconice--eyes:
lol, thank you very much! i'm glad you like it!

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"Anyone who doesn't appreciate poetry, doesn't understand that it's all about seduction."

:kiss:
:iconmaici:
You're welcome ;)

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The probability of someone watching you is proportional to the stupidity of your action.

Maici
Give my Gallery some Lovin'!!
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:icontuf-luv:
lol sorry i was alittle scatter brained yesterday lol

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I don't get why people lable other people or themselves I personaly think that you should just be you and not care what other people think.
:iconice--eyes:
:D

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"Anyone who doesn't appreciate poetry, doesn't understand that it's all about seduction."

:kiss:
:icondezera:
yes! love it girl! :+fav: for you

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